god is a fairy tale hero
i used to believe
he sat on a chair in the cloud
an undentefilled chalice in his hand
but now i believe in people and life and good
doing right
not because of the almighty boss ready to strike us down or love us without condition
but because right is right
I feel this is a good poem, however I feel the reference to smoothie is out of place - possibly another word or thought would make this stronger???
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