It is coming at me
Like a train
It is arriving soon
actually loudly thundering
it is coming at me
the rather large animal
Today I will but defeat it
I charge at the red
He waves a red blanket
At the bull
Your bull stampedes upon paper
Empty cliches
Inactive verbs
Redundant adverbs
Passive voice
Flat characters, general words
Phony dialogue, confusing pronouns
Inconsistent POV
I wave my red pen
At your bull
-your editor
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